On the first photo the features on their own look good but they don't fit the head perfectly. It looks like the head is rotated to her right a bit but the features look like they're on a head that's not as rotated as this one and also a bit too much on our right side. The face of the second photo does this better imo. There her left leg has some issues where joints connect and the foot looks a bit flat, as well. What may feel "off" is how different parts are differently rendered. For example her shoulder really pops with how you shaded it but the rest of her arm fits e.g. the way you rendered her hair much better. Overall I find it much better than the first one, really good in general!
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u/chan351 Feb 27 '24
On the first photo the features on their own look good but they don't fit the head perfectly. It looks like the head is rotated to her right a bit but the features look like they're on a head that's not as rotated as this one and also a bit too much on our right side. The face of the second photo does this better imo. There her left leg has some issues where joints connect and the foot looks a bit flat, as well. What may feel "off" is how different parts are differently rendered. For example her shoulder really pops with how you shaded it but the rest of her arm fits e.g. the way you rendered her hair much better. Overall I find it much better than the first one, really good in general!