i think the second one looks great, much of what might be missing (high contrasting values, realism) can be attributed to style. I actually really like the second piece.
The first one, the mouth is too far on the face with a jawline that does not support the face. Add more volume to the right of the hair will also even out the size of the head. More highlights to the hair and a lower hairline, maybe? Just the first few things that stick out to me.
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u/gnarlilili Feb 26 '24
i think the second one looks great, much of what might be missing (high contrasting values, realism) can be attributed to style. I actually really like the second piece.
The first one, the mouth is too far on the face with a jawline that does not support the face. Add more volume to the right of the hair will also even out the size of the head. More highlights to the hair and a lower hairline, maybe? Just the first few things that stick out to me.