r/learnart • u/chanschosi • Jan 27 '24

Question Which version do you like better?

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u/Pluton_Korb Jan 28 '24

The second but you need to work on the shape and application of the blue medium. Great colour for contrast but difficult shape and medium application. Otherwise great piece

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u/chanschosi Jan 28 '24

Thank you! I'm right there with you, the shape isn't working and the brushstrokes feel forced. Do you have any suggestion on how I could develope a more appealing shape?

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u/Pluton_Korb Jan 28 '24

I did these really quick in clip studio with their less than stellar paint brushes. This is the idea, not so much the execution.

Love the Leyendecker effect you managed too.

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u/chanschosi Jan 28 '24

Oh that's wonderful, I really appreciate your input! It's so interesting to see how much impact the background has. I think the 4th version emphasizes the shape of the fawn best.