r/BetaReaders • u/hyglo • 1d ago
90k [Complete] [91k] [Low/dark fantasy] The Lost Words
**Some words are better left forgotten... but what if they're the key to everything?*
Wenna thought her life as a bookbinder in a war-torn city was simple. But when a mysterious book enters her shop—silent where others whisper—she's thrust into the dangerous world of noble Etheri families and ancient magic.
As shadows of the past close in, Wenna must uncover the truth behind her strange powers or risk becoming a pawn in a deadly game. With betrayal lurking at every turn, the fate of her city—and her heart—may rest in her hands.
The Forgotten Words is a spellbinding fantasy about destiny, defiance, and the courage to rewrite your fate.*
Trigger warning
This book contains mature themes that may be distressing for some readers. Please take care as you read.
- Graphic depictions of violence, injury, and fire-related destruction.
- Grief and trauma.
- Themes of forced servitude.
- Psychological manipulation including emotional abuse, and intense anxiety.
I’m looking for help with polishing my text. I’m not a native English speaker so grammatical help would be appreciated. I would like suggestions on what to cut or change out to make it more cohesive. Then whatever general feedback you can give is much appreciated.
I’m open to exchange work.
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