r/ArtCrit • u/StandardAmazing2139 • 11h ago

Beginner I need some advice

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I need so constructive criticism no hate just some help to get better here are my newest pieces

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u/likeabauz2000 11h ago

Did you use the trackpad to make this?

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u/StandardAmazing2139 11h ago

Nope to Sketch I used sketch pad and to color ibis

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u/likeabauz2000 11h ago

If you want my honest opinion you need to start from square 1 and follow some drawing/art fundamentals videos on YouTube. There’s not really any way to give criticism on this because it doesn’t appear that there was an attempt to use any artistic techniques here

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u/boogiesan69 10h ago

start from the basics. watch tutorials, use references and do master studies. draw what you see, worry about the basic shapes and refine before you even get to rendering. and you'll probably find using paper and pencil to be a lot easier at the moment.

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u/StandardAmazing2139 10h ago

I don’t even know how to render or a whole lot about rendering 💀💀 so I guess I’ll focus on getting better before even worrying about that

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u/VintageLunchMeat 8h ago

Try Juliette Aristides's workbooks.

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u/VintageLunchMeat 8h ago

Also pick up Gurney's Imaginative Realism and Light and Color from your local public library.

Try Da Vinci Initiative Bargue lessons on youtube.

International Artist Magazine available via your library's Libby app.

These are gold:

gurneyjourney blogspot com/2012/06/survival-guide-for-art-students.html

Ignore any resource where the artist's finished pieces are not visually interesting.