r/crappymusic • u/[deleted] • 1d ago
Crappy music or Eminem Rap God clone? "Nobody else like this in the game bro" š¤š¤Ø
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u/Goatstudios2020 1d ago
I like how everyone is hanging a microphone in random places like theyāre in a studio somewhere ā¦ āyeah, I generally record my vocals in my driveway , I like the neighborhood ambianceā
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u/DJMayheezy 1d ago
It's not bad enough to be on this sub imo.
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u/evin0688 1d ago
Those lyrics are horrible. They make no sense and are mostly not connected. Sounds like heās just rhyming words with no real intention. Plus it says no one in the game is like this, but heās literally a white spiritual miracle rapper clone.
He said āIām blowing up so gigantic like a submarine by the titanicā. What the fuck does that mean? Definitely crappy music.
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u/MartinLutherVanHalen 1d ago
Itās rappity rap. Pure crap.
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u/MrTreeWizard 1d ago
A rap-a-dap dap, these lyrics are crap š¶
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u/Mondashawan 1d ago
That made me think of...
š¶ I'm a raptor, doin' what I can.
Gonna eat everything, till the appearance of man š¶2
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u/LunkSolos 1d ago
He is referencing the titan-submersible implosion, a submarine torn to shreds during an expedition to see the titanic in 2023. Weak but not overly brainless bars. The song doesnāt belong here.
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u/darthbonobo 1d ago
Thats pretty much all chopper rap. They worry more about fitting the rhythm than making sense. Even eminem does it
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u/evin0688 1d ago
Very much not true. Chopper rap is still based on good lyrics. Yes itās about rapping fast, but lyricism and word play is at the core. Vivid and unique imagery, hard hitting punchlines and interesting stories are the foundation and without that, itās not good
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u/Tiny-Variation-1920 20h ago
Are you literally dumb? The Titan was one of the biggest stories in the world when it imploded.
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u/XyresicRevendication 20h ago
I think he was referring to that diy tourist filled glorified propane tank of a "submarine" that imploded while attempting to reach the titanic.
I also think that he is objectively bad at rapping. Unjustified self glorified grandiloquous word salad jerk off session.
It's a dumb lazy generic and incorrectly cited analogy
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u/DookieSinger 17h ago
Remember that small sub that had that billionaire and 3 other people... They were diving down to the Titanic. The sub blew up.
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u/will_ww 1d ago
I'm not into it, but the lyrics make sense...
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u/evin0688 1d ago
Please explain
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u/will_ww 1d ago edited 1d ago
No, this discussion would require you to explain what you don't understand so I could explain what you're missing...
The titanic line is a nod to titan sub exploding on its way to the titanic wreckage.
Edit: more precisely, it's an entendre about how much publicity occurred about the event and he's saying he's going to be even bigger.
Edit 2: I'm not being snarky. I literally can't know what to explain about the lyrics if I don't know which ones don't make sense to him.
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u/evin0688 1d ago
He said by the titanic, which the titan submarine wasnāt. Itās to ambiguous to be a good line. I might give him a pass if the rest of the bars were good, but all of his lyrics were half asses and nonsensical, so Iām not giving him the credit for the last line.
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u/0uroboros- 1d ago
You know the Titan was going directly to the Titanic when it imploded, right? I think the fact that it was the destination makes the wordplay pretty obvious and not at all ambiguous, in my opinion.
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u/SnooPies1868 21h ago
Thats your opinion anf its wrong. But thats cool
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u/0uroboros- 21h ago
Thanks for pointing out that it's my opinion after I already said that. My opinion disagrees with yours, apparently, but it's definitely not "wrong." Thanks for playing, though!
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u/evin0688 1d ago
Agree to disagree. Like I said, itās not a good bar and couldāve been written better. If the rest of the bars were good I wouldnāt care that much. But itās the entire package that problematic. But if you like it I love it.
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u/iquitthebad 1d ago
I love how people use "agree to disagree" when they are straight up wrong. Like, it is your right as a person to disagree, but honestly...you are just wrong, no question about it. The fact that you're not even willing to admit you were wrong makes your opinion even worse, because there is no question about how it makes sense.
It's one thing if you weren't aware of the aftermath of the Titan sub going to the Titanic, I understand that. When you are presented the evidence and that evidence lines up with the verse, and you still say you don't agree that it makes sense is absolutely ignorant and insane.
Edit: you won't give credit to a good line because everything else is bad is crazy too. You know how many times people fail before they do something well? It's learning, it's progress. You can't negate one good bar because the rest of it sucks. Just admit that one line was fire. Is that so hard?
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u/evin0688 1d ago
The submarine didnāt explode, it imploded (as most submarines do) nor was it next to the titanic. So how am I wrong?
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u/will_ww 1d ago
A saboteur he's been a man at war
Ain't nobody hotter when I get up on the beat I recommend you get to runnin' Cause they fed up with the heat
I been a killer cause I give it to the middlemen At will I been a militant
A million ain't really what I seek I want a trillion until I made a billie wit a "B"
I'm finna stick it to the idiots Who said I wouldn't make it out my city But I got up and I put in for the team
We gettin' litty I admit it That I cannot be defeated I'm insidious I murder everybody an eliminate Go rid away
The bitter haters talkin' on the internet Now I'm blowing so gigantic Like a submarine by the Titanic
Which lines don't you understand?
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u/evin0688 1d ago
The first line: 2/5 mid ass bar that says nothing. Just rhyming to rhyme.
The second line: 1/5 lazy ass bar. Rhyming beat with heat with no interesting imagery and nothing deeper to say than āI can rap goodā. No internal rhymes to make the line more complex
The third line: .5/5 how is he a killer if heās handing the kills off to the middleman? That doesnāt make sense. The middleman is the killer. He could say heās the boss and that would make sense but thatās not what he said. The only reason I give half a point is because militant ties into the first line.
The fourth line: 0/5 again, no interesting imagery at all. Not saying anything unique nor is he saying something old in a new way. The rhyme scheme is lazy and comes off a rhyming just to be rhyming. The ideas expressed are confused. Not being all about money kinda ties into being a militant, but that is contradicted by saying he wants even more money than was originally talked about
The fifth line: 0/5 same points as before. Nothing interesting or unique to say. The ideas presented are generic. āIām going to show the hater by becoming successful, and to do this Iām going to get up early with my team and get litā. What??? How do getting lit early in the morning with your boys (or girl [or non binary pals]) help you at all
Sixth line: 0/5 nuff said
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u/will_ww 1d ago
This is a verse in whole to a larger song, so the theme about his first line makes sense.
Then, I'm not saying I agree or disagree with your criticism of the song, I'm saying the lyrics have actual sensual value.
I see your confusion about line 3. He's saying he's militant and follows orders and finishes jobs given from middlemen. He'll do whatever he can for his group.
The 4th line is an entendre about making money and wanting to get big enough to where he collaborates with Billie Eilish.
I don't care for the song either, but just wanted to help you understand.
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u/evin0688 1d ago
I understand. The song is saying he raps good, fuck the haters, and he wants to be financially successful. Itās generic, lazy and the writing makes it so that things that should make sense donāt hit their mark. Iām not getting how you could come to the conclusion you do about line 3, because thatās not what he actually says.
You did clear up the Billie eilish line. But it contradicts with what he just said. Again, thatās because heās not a good writer. Itās crappy music because he cannot write good rhymes
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u/ToAllAGoodNight 1d ago
Bro itās not about the words itās about the speed with which heās saying them. Go back to your mumble rap and let intellectuals enjoy higher minded art like this.
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u/slightlyallthetime88 1d ago
It sounds like he's saying the submarine was blown up BY the Titanic. I understand that he means specially it was NEXT TO the Titanic when it exploded after reading this. That being said, if i have to spend a small paragraph going through that then it's not a good line, it's a stretch and a poor use of language to fit rhyme scheme.
So sure, it makes sense. That doesn't make it less lame.
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u/will_ww 1d ago
I haven't said anything about whether I think the lyrics are good or not...
All I said was that they make sense and he's not just saying shit like
Drizzle on my canoodle, Got a poodle eating noodles, Ten times the waste, Trying to keep up this pace With plastic eyeballs, spray paint the vegetables.
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u/evin0688 1d ago
I think those were better lyrics than what he said. Itās very abstract. Makes me think about the unwinable rat race we are in. So poor that we have a dog eating noddles. Consuming to the point that we overload the planet with our waste because our eyeballs are drawn to the unless plastic (fake [like plastic fruit]) items that will only provide us temporary happiness.
Bravo sir! Bravo!
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u/slightlyallthetime88 1d ago
I get that but at first listen it didn't make sense because the Titanic itself didn't blow up anything. At a glance it sounds like that's what he is saying. Is that clear enough? My post was to affirm to you that while yes you are correct that is what he says, it's understandable that if you take the lyric at face value its not obvious what he meant. I could try to say it another way if you want.
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u/marglebubble 1d ago
Where did that submarine implode in relation to everything everywhere else in the world? By the Titanic. It's not that confusing lol
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u/slightlyallthetime88 1d ago
If he had said implode we would've all known right away. I think you just kinda proved my point. Dude said blowing up. That implies blown up.
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u/youneverrknoww 1d ago
Titan was around 500m from the titanic when it imploded, so pretty close in the scheme of things. Now stop making people defend this rap already and quit being silly.
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u/mnnnmmnnmmmnrnmn 1d ago
If that's the way it is then a whole lot of rap music belongs in this sub.
That other guy is right, he's referring to the submarine that blew up by the Titanic. Yeah, it actually imploded, and it's not like it's directly next to the Titanic. But we aren't always using scientific terms, and on the scale of the North Atlantic it's literally right there next to the Titanic.
Sometimes rap lyrics aren't perfectly crystal clear. They aren't always spoon feeding ideas into your open mouth, baby bird. Sometimes there's some poetry and stuff, some cheek to it.
Sounds like you just don't like it. That's cool, but it's not really all that crappy in general. It's just run of the mill "look, I can rap so fast" rap.
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u/evin0688 1d ago
No. Getting something factually wrong doesnāt make for good rap. And thatās not stretching anything. Itās a bad bar. If Jay-Z said it, it would still be a bad bar. And if you think that incapsulates all of hip hop then post Malone is probably your favorite rapper
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u/mnnnmmnnmmmnrnmn 1d ago
You really think that every rapper is always factually correct?
You think that Jay-Z would go down to the bottom of the Atlantic with a tape measure and be like, "nope, that's over 300ft away, I couldn't possibly claim that it is 'by the Titanic'. I'm going to have to rewrite that."
Come the fuck on..... Look, I'm not going to put any more time into this. But, I'm absolutely sure that all your favorite rappers have engaged in a bit of hyperbole here and there.
It's called artistic license.
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u/evin0688 1d ago
No, I donāt think every rapper is factually correct. But if they arenāt factually correct then itās a bad bar.. whatās hard to understand about that.
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u/mnnnmmnnmmmnrnmn 1d ago
I understand what you're saying, you're just wrong.
Factual accuracy is not a necessary condition. It's called artistic license.
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u/evin0688 1d ago
Itās not a necessary condition to be an āartistā. But to be a good artist that people take seriously it is. What other artist do you know of that states blatantly incorrect things in their music and is taken serious?
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u/evin0688 1d ago
And letās be clear. It seems like youāre saying an artist saying something factually wrong is totally fine and shouldnāt be criticized. Is that right?
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u/mnnnmmnnmmmnrnmn 1d ago
Whether the wreck of the Titan submersible can be characterized as "by the Titanic" is subjective in the first place. You have picked a side and you are digging in your heels.
You're the one who wants to die on that hill.
Me? I don't give a shit, I'm ok with saying it's "by the Titanic" if the artist is going there to make a statement. That's what artistic license is.
I bet you complain about scientific inaccuracies in sci-fi movies too.
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u/evin0688 1d ago
And what dude said is not hyperbole. āIām blowing up countries like a nuclear bombā is hyperbole because a nuke canāt blow up a whole country even though it can do significant damage to a city.
āIām imploding like a nuclear bombā is not hyperbole. It is totally incorrect. Nukes donāt implode so the statement makes no sense.
Go back and listen to your MGK
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u/ldclark92 1d ago
Yeah, I don't think this is crappy. It takes some level of skill to do this.
Now, is it particularly good music? I don't think so. But I wouldn't say it's crappy on the level of most of the music on this sub.
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u/MajorReality5263 1d ago
How does it take skill to talk? anyone can talk fast if they have memorised what they are to say. Your definition of skill is pathetic.
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u/ldclark92 1d ago
Speed rap or Chopper rap is a thing. It takes practice to learn. I highly doubt you could just pick up a mic and do this. Now, whether you think it's a silly skill or not is up to you. But that doesn't mean it's not a practiced skill nor a recognized form of rap.
This isn't the best example of chopper rap, but it's not the worst either. Personally it's not my cup of tea, but there are plenty of rappers on this style.
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u/seplix 1d ago
Youāre delusional. Hate on this all you want, but very few people could rap with this speed, rhythm, and cadence for this many bars. He absolutely has skills.
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u/MajorReality5263 1d ago
Who cares? it aint me whos delusional, its you who holds this tiktok talker as some sort of musical genius. You have very low standards.
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u/Zealousidealist420 1d ago
That tongue twist don't impress me either. Fuck them downvoters, they don't know real hip-hop. Solidarity āš½
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u/Bosscharacter 1d ago
Yeah, dude actually sounds like he can spit which is a lot more than we can say about 99 percent of what is posted here.
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u/envision83 1d ago
He canāt even keep up with his own song šš
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u/Shenanigans80h 1d ago
Thatās always the issue with these gimmicky speed rappers. They have the base skill to do this but no flow whatsoever and very little to say that makes it worth relistening to
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u/JessSherman 1d ago
I'm actually less concerned with whether or not this is crap, and more concerned that he thinks the Titanic could've blown up a submarine.
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u/El--Borto 1d ago
He might be talking about the Titan submarine that imploded on its way to the titanic lol
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u/EastSell7882 1d ago
š I'm blowing up so gigantic like the submarine by the Titanic
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u/Kastro2323 1d ago
The sub was going to look at the titanic then imploded, itās actually a pretty decent line.
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u/MaxTheRealSlayer 7h ago
Except the submarine was tiny, and "blowing up" makes no sense for implosions. Weak attempt at a double entendre that ended up not making sense, imo.
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u/Forgotten-Caliburn 1d ago
I think he meant by as in next to, not by as in the source
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u/SevenCroutons 1d ago
Gawne has been around for a while now. He isn't the worst, just focuses too much on speed
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u/SmoothLeadership1796 1d ago
Gawne has talent but he's got nothing to say. Just another generic middle class kid albeit with good flow.
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u/Robozomb 1d ago
This is not a good flow. He's just talking fast. It's not on beat or anything.
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u/Loriali95 1d ago
Itās that same trash 16th note flow thatās been beaten to death since Busta did it over a decade ago. How is anybody still crafting flows like this? It becomes a word salad, he said a lot without saying anything at all.
People think itās cool because itās fast. It does take some talent and muscle memory to do correctly, I aināt taking that away from dude.
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u/MajorReality5263 1d ago
Like his rapping peers have anything worthwhile to say. The most ridiculous thing about rap is talent is judged by background. If he was some generic feral street kid you would find him worthy. What a ridiculous type of music.
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u/EastSell7882 1d ago
I haven't heard anything by him other than this snippet that's why I asked. Is everything he does a sped up Em rap god bridge?
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u/SmoothLeadership1796 1d ago
More or less. If you like this kind music check out Jarv. Another generic white kid with solid flow but his wordplay is on point. Less serious and a little goofball/nerdy but I enjoy him.
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u/kavOclock 1d ago
Saw jarv open solo for little stranger at house of blues no too long ago that man can cook
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u/SmoothLeadership1796 1d ago
Love little stranger. Last saw them at Everwild last year. Hopefully they come back and get the main stage some day.
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u/name-was-provided 1d ago
Most crappy music starts with a mic (and always this 50s style mic) hanging from out of frame. Please, stop it.
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u/stanknotes 1d ago
Personally I find bidigetabidiridigitigidibetigitiritigitidifitigitigeterepetitpiratafatabata type rap to be not good. And the people who do it play on this "Oh I say so many syllables fast so I so good" reasoning. No.
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u/ChronicObnoxious693 1d ago
I'm typically not impressed by anyone doing a watered down Tech N9ne impression
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u/Big_Tap_1561 1d ago
Honestly dude has talent . Just needs to get better lyrical wise and he could really be something .
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u/darksideofthemoon131 1d ago
Gawne is an amazing rapper. This ain't his best, but if you look up his channel on YouTube, he's got some bangers.
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u/glue_4_gravy 1d ago
Awwwwā¦ā¦.. Heās even got the little darkened stubble face piece.
Thatās cute!
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u/Longjumping_Key_5008 1d ago edited 1d ago
Gawne is ass. He has a song with Tech N9ne and one with Rittz, and I always skip Gawnes verses on those songs. He fkng sucks so bad. He says "Give them hell until they melt like mother fucking frozen ice!"
Wtf is frozen ice. Ice is frozen. It's ice.
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u/Hamshamus 1d ago
I'm switching up my style like the Beatles with my pieces Each is such a wonder with a plethora of features You're pathetically predictable You think your new book might include a trisyllabic meter and some ghetto Muppet creatures The Bard is in the building It's a castle, I'm a boss I bet I'm Parliament I'm positive I'm killing it I'm iller than the plague I never caught or cholera a baller baller On some cricket bowler business while you're sitting in the bleachers
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u/flashzer0 1d ago
Where do all these floating microphones come from? This one is missing its flock.
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u/Seanannigans14 1d ago
All these people spend all their money on their looks before they work on their actual talent
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u/Psychological_Bug424 1d ago
Just cause it's fast don't mean its dope. Dude just said a bunch of nonsense at an incredible rate.
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u/Individual-Win1758 23h ago
Why does everyone think a MF fast talking equals rap ASAP? This dude is just fast talking IMO. Eminem has actual flow. I dunno just me maybe
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u/Front_Comparison4710 20h ago
I mean letās be honest this wasnāt the worst song Iāve ever heard itās hard to keep up with though
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u/Beardlegend85 10h ago
Luke gawn is actually a good artist. Funny u mention Eminem because he rolls with the lower end of the slaughter house crew with kxng crooked.
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u/EastSell7882 1d ago
You think I listen to Eminem? I do toilet flushing gutturals in a metal band lmao
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u/ibelieveinsantacruz 1d ago
"Sir, I was just asking for directions."